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Jane's comments on organization:
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Jane Krauss (JK): So, it was their job to
work as a group to put a presentation together and they had
to divide up the work in a way that each kid was responsible
for telling about a state and a city and a state.
Boy 1: First you will be going to Arizona
and Utah. But at the last part of the trip, you'll be going
to Hawaii.
Boy 2: Alaska is so big, you can fit twelve
states the size of New York into it.
(JK): Everybody had lots of information
and it was almost more difficult to filter out what was irrelevant
than it was to, you know, and to get down to kind of the heart
of the matter than it was to, ah, get enough, certainly.
Girl 1: The entertainment will cost five
hundred ninety-three dollars. But don't forget you're going
to the happiest place in the world: Disneyland. Transportation
will cost one thousand five hundred twenty-five dollars and
fifty cents.
(JK): They had an outline that they could
follow that...that...that helped them move through the speech,
making sure there was a clear introduction and then the body
of the speech had nice transitions within in using words like
"first" and "next" and "finally"
and just those kind of phrases that glue the body of the speech
together. And then trying to punch up the ending, you know,
with a nice conclusion.
Girl 1: The first night in Lexington, you'll
check into the Sheriton Suites.
Boy 3: On the third day, we're going to
have you visit the Statue of Liberty on Ellis Island.
Girl 1: Only for a mere one hundred seventy-two
dollars.
Boy 1: Thank you for using the "Everywhere
You Want to Be Travel Agency".
(JK): So that helped them
with the organization. I think most kids had a fairly good
organized speech.
Total running time: 00:01:32
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